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Your love is like an adrenaline rush
The way you eye me
Readying yourself for the chase.
Every time we touch
My heart jumps like it has been jolted
With a defibrillator.
My heart beats faster and faster
With every playfight
Every tickle
Every kiss
Every scratch and bite.
Like a cat and Mouse
You eye me like you're ready to pounce
I playfully flee
Hiding
And waiting
Til I finally hear you collapse on the couch
Where I can finally spring
My trap.
In a final epic battle
A storm of laughter fills the room
Until one surrenders to the other
The other becoming the victor
Until the storm fades
And we form a truce
If only for
The moment.
The way you eye me
Readying yourself for the chase.
Every time we touch
My heart jumps like it has been jolted
With a defibrillator.
My heart beats faster and faster
With every playfight
Every tickle
Every kiss
Every scratch and bite.
Like a cat and Mouse
You eye me like you're ready to pounce
I playfully flee
Hiding
And waiting
Til I finally hear you collapse on the couch
Where I can finally spring
My trap.
In a final epic battle
A storm of laughter fills the room
Until one surrenders to the other
The other becoming the victor
Until the storm fades
And we form a truce
If only for
The moment.
Been working on this for about a week. Inspired by my boyfriend Brendan. Never a dull moment with him around! lol anyway, I hope you all like it!
© 2013 - 2024 Little-yuyu
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It's awesome sis! 
I like how you have the poem set up and broken up, a slice of life moment of how you two get along, and you bring the reader along with you with the easy flow of it. Each stanza made me smile, and its very easy to relate too, for the reader to see themselves in the word play. 
great job!
I like how you have the poem set up and broken up, a slice of life moment of how you two get along, and you bring the reader along with you with the easy flow of it. Each stanza made me smile, and its very easy to relate too, for the reader to see themselves in the word play. great job!